Author's note: I challenged myself to delve into the depths of the word 'Pile' inspired by Miguel S. challenge. Writing with just 70 words proved both challenging and inspiring, evoking an instant reaction that continually stimulates me. A brief yet powerful poem, shaping words into arrows that strike the heart and linger in memory. When I finished writing this poem, I felt an ache in my soul.
Smoke, fog,
and a blinding smell,
a silence like a distante eerie whisper,
piles of hair and old clothes,
one by one,
then another on top of the others,
lots of ones and others,
an amorphous heap,
faces with sunken, empty eyes,
hearts without names, pasts, or dreams,
just cold piles of skin and bones,
hidden from view by the damp earth,
that's how they built
endless mounds in Auschwitz
©Rolando Andrade, 2025
OMG! Rolando!! I could feel my heartbeat accelerate, and my breathing get shallower, and my whole body tense up as I was reading... not knowing what it was all about ... long before I got to the last word, which reveals everything.
Stunning poem about a horrific pile. So well written
Chilling and haunting 💙