What a gorgeous piece of writing! I have no words. Melancholy and real it feels like you've just shared something very personal. There's one thing I don't like though.... the AI image, I would have liked a real picture. But it's Christmas so I shouldn't be critical. I love your story and that's what counts. Thank you and Merry Christmas.
It's quite amazing that you wrote this fine, coherent story in only five minutes! That line in the second paragraph really tells a tale about Paul: "He must have been no more than 40 years, but he looked as if he had already passed 70 years." Paul's premature aging seems to be attributed to "rivers of experience", and the writer also hints that he is separated from his family and quite lonely because of this. This is a very focused and compassionate story.
What a gorgeous piece of writing! I have no words. Melancholy and real it feels like you've just shared something very personal. There's one thing I don't like though.... the AI image, I would have liked a real picture. But it's Christmas so I shouldn't be critical. I love your story and that's what counts. Thank you and Merry Christmas.
Thank you for your heartwarming comment Writer.
It's quite amazing that you wrote this fine, coherent story in only five minutes! That line in the second paragraph really tells a tale about Paul: "He must have been no more than 40 years, but he looked as if he had already passed 70 years." Paul's premature aging seems to be attributed to "rivers of experience", and the writer also hints that he is separated from his family and quite lonely because of this. This is a very focused and compassionate story.
Martin, thank you so much for your comment. You are allways very kind
I was thinking that too. How much and how well put together this piece is in such short time.
Amazing Rolando 🩵
Thank you Grace