I was pulled into your story from the start, Rolando! I'm glad the story ended with Pedro. I kept thinking, as Maria was entering the water, of her mother. Another grief to surmount. Another heart that will never heal. I thought Pedro was long gone. I enjoy your writing!
Great story! The ending wasn't what I expected, but at the same time I wasn't disappointed. I thought the reaching hand would be from her mother, also someone who has been there for her all the time and so also an eternal kind of love.
I really enjoyed reading your writing in this genre. I'm looking forward to reading more.
I was pulled into your story from the start, Rolando! I'm glad the story ended with Pedro. I kept thinking, as Maria was entering the water, of her mother. Another grief to surmount. Another heart that will never heal. I thought Pedro was long gone. I enjoy your writing!
thank you so much for reading and commenting Sharon. I am glad you enjoyed it
Well written story, Rolando!
Thank you Leon 🙏✍️
Gripping little story. Really enjoyed it 🩵
Awesome story I didn’t expect the ending. I like the ending, though I still believe in love and soulmates and happily ever Afters.
Thank you Hazel
Great story! The ending wasn't what I expected, but at the same time I wasn't disappointed. I thought the reaching hand would be from her mother, also someone who has been there for her all the time and so also an eternal kind of love.
I really enjoyed reading your writing in this genre. I'm looking forward to reading more.