Beautiful but sad, it reaches the heart when a love lives on in spirit. So mysterious. Happy I experienced when I knew him that he was a boy and I was a girl. 🥰
Thank you very much, Grace. Yes, everything is always fine, because one way or another everything will be solved. You just have to navigate the eternal and timeless river of the Universe
This is a really fine poem, Rolando. What I would call 'a big picture poem' dealing with the 'timeless rivers ... beyond love and eternity'. It reminds me a little of the works of Rumi and Kahlil Gibhran. Well done.
Hi Martin. Thank you for your comment. It means a lot to me. I was flattered but at the same time a little nervous, considering who my poem reminded you of. I think you've set the bar high :)
If we set the bar high, our minds will rise to the challenge. At first we go to that level nervously, thinking we don't belong there. Then our minds start thinking: 'Well, maybe I do.' And gradually it becomes our natural level. In any case, it's a fine poem.
A deep dive into the soul of existence in eternity. It made me not want to come up for air, just stay there swirling around in the love that awaits us on the other side. Such beautiful poetry so full of hope. Thank you for writing it and sharing.
Carrie, thank you very much for your comment. Love is always eternal, just like the lives that remain in our memories, and even when they end, or we end, the symbols of our existence will always remain here.
Beautiful but sad, it reaches the heart when a love lives on in spirit. So mysterious. Happy I experienced when I knew him that he was a boy and I was a girl. 🥰
Thanks for your misterious comment Mary :)
This makes me feel like everything is going to be ok. Beautiful, ethereal..loved it 🩵
Thank you very much, Grace. Yes, everything is always fine, because one way or another everything will be solved. You just have to navigate the eternal and timeless river of the Universe
This is a really fine poem, Rolando. What I would call 'a big picture poem' dealing with the 'timeless rivers ... beyond love and eternity'. It reminds me a little of the works of Rumi and Kahlil Gibhran. Well done.
Hi Martin. Thank you for your comment. It means a lot to me. I was flattered but at the same time a little nervous, considering who my poem reminded you of. I think you've set the bar high :)
If we set the bar high, our minds will rise to the challenge. At first we go to that level nervously, thinking we don't belong there. Then our minds start thinking: 'Well, maybe I do.' And gradually it becomes our natural level. In any case, it's a fine poem.
This is lovely. ✨
Thank you
Trudi
A beautiful, hopeful poem
Thank you so much rena
I feel like this poem is made for me and my future partner
I'm glad my poem makes you feel that... everyone who lives a great love, feels like floating in a Timeless river
A deep dive into the soul of existence in eternity. It made me not want to come up for air, just stay there swirling around in the love that awaits us on the other side. Such beautiful poetry so full of hope. Thank you for writing it and sharing.
Carrie, thank you very much for your comment. Love is always eternal, just like the lives that remain in our memories, and even when they end, or we end, the symbols of our existence will always remain here.
Just so beautiful 🙏✨
thank you so much
Scrumptous 😊